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Peer-based feedback and high school planning from a student who's been through it

💬 Personal, one-on-one feedback
✍️ Student-centered approach
🎯 Focused on your authentic voice
"Finding my voice..."
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The best essays aren't perfect—they're authentic

— My approach to essay feedback
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Williams College
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About Me

QuestBridge National College Match Recipient

Aldrich Magpali - QuestBridge Student
Aldrich Jad Sy Magpali

I am a current college student attending the #1 National Liberal Arts College in the United States on a full ride through the QuestBridge National College Match program. I offer peer-based guidance on college essays and high school planning.

📝 Important: I am not a professional college consultant. All feedback comes from my personal experience as a student who recently navigated the admissions process.

I believe that authenticity and vulnerability are key to crafting a compelling application. Many top colleges receive applicants with stellar stats: 4.0 GPA, perfect SAT or ACT. What differentiates you from others is your unique story.

I can best assist students from low-income/first-generation backgrounds who wish to pursue a STEM major.

My Free Resources

Your success means more to me than payment. Pay it forward once you become successful.

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College List

Comprehensive Google Sheet template to help you stay organized during college search & applciation

  • Location & population
  • Academic stats
  • Progress tracker
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Essay Organizer

Google Doc template for keeping track of college specific supplementals & personal statement

  • All-in-one tracking
  • Color coding
  • Pre-formatted
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Tutorly

My free peer-tutoring organization to help you succeed in all classes and prepare for exams

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  • Videos
  • Practice sheets & notes
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Peer-based guidance options

Line-by-Line Essay Review Icon

Detailed feedback on your personal statement with line-by-line comments and overall structural suggestions.

  • One round of feedback
  • 48-hour turnaround
  • Follow-up email support
  • 900 word limit

Personalized College Prep Roadmap

45-minute guidance session to discuss course selection, extracurricular planning, and application timeline strategy.

  • Personalized roadmap
  • Extracurricular brainstorming
  • College application tips
  • Scholarship hunting
  • Post-session summary notes

Holistic Application Review

Holistic review of your application package including activity list, honors section, and overall narrative cohesion.

  • Full application review
  • Activity list optimization
  • Narrative consistency check
  • Two 30-minute follow-up calls
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Learn from my successful application essays

Personal Statement: "I Used to Be Scared of Chips"

Common App 650 Words QuestBridge 800 Words
$24.99 $14.99

This file includes QuestBridge personal statement.

I used to be scared of chips. An eight-ounce bag could either ruin my week or be a miracle in disguise...

What you'll learn: How to use specific sensory details, create emotional resonance, and structure a narrative that shows growth.

QuestBridge Supplementals

Supplemental Non-Academic 35 Characters
$4.99

Package includes my QuestBridge writing exervise supplemental, short-answer supplementals, activities, and activities writing.

When offering my brag sheet to my teacher, she declined, saying...

What you'll learn: How to approach these supplemental writing pieces with authenticity and illustrative details, and write the short-responses without breaking the character limit.

Important: These essays are meant to inspire your own writing and show what successful essays look like. Never copy or plagiarize—admissions officers will detect this and it will result in rejection.

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